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First Rise.

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M y W e b s i t e
T W I S T E D H E A R T S A R T S . C O M


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Stock Used:
Model: *PirateQueen-Stock
Background: =Pickyme
Texture: ~Insan-Stock
Border Texture: *nitch-stock
Fireflies: ~gear-mad
Locket: =night-fate-stock



This took a long time because I kept starting over :faint:. I'm pretty happy with the result though, and I couldn't thank the stock providers for any better stock to work with ^.^.

I'm sure I don't have to tell you guys Full-View is best ;).


Featured Here: :love:
*kuhrissa - [link]
~blu-ish - [link]
=Emerald-Depths - [link]


:icongimmefeedback:
Does it look like one piece? In other words, is it blended well? ^^; Do you like the position of the model? Is the face in the background too big? Should it be smaller? Or perhaps bigger? And finally... would you visit my gallery after viewing this piece? :)

Thank you in advance for all the helpful comments! Happy Holidays and stay safe :meow:.


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LordScythe's avatar
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Impact

First of all I like it <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":D" title=":D (Big Grin)" /> and sorry for my horrible english.

The composition and the idea is great but I think (and may be I'm not the best for it because i'm learning too), that some parts could be modified to blend better.

The model have too much yellow compared with the general tone of the photomanipulation. If you lower it a bit it will look more integrated into the scene. Also I suggest to add some shadows under the model layer to reforce the feeling of staying over the tree and the rocks (some behind her body and arm, and some at her foot.).

Finally the semitransparent face at the background, I suggest you to add a mask layer to hide softly the border of the original image and made it blend better with the background.

For the rest... awesome! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="20" height="20" alt=":clap:" title="Clap" />